Drowning *NWS*

[MyaLover]

Just a few done out of boredom this evening, C&C as always

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5.

 

[MyaLover]

A couple more edits:

1a.

2a.

 

[spiffybeth]

2 and 1a both have skin tones that say youre dead. that was my initial thought looking at 2 (face and hand), but when i got to 1a, i really felt that way. and for me, its hard to tell that youre under water but i like the concept.

 

[heip]

I like the PP on the second one of the first set.

 

[platano]

doesnt do much for me.. i didnt even know she was underwater..

 

[MyaLover]

Anyone have any ideas for a better title??

 

[Judge Sharpe]

I like number 5 best. The nipple bar kills the others for me (my age is showing) 5 is well composed, the tones are good, and is an overall good shot.
I hate to say it, but they all, especially the ones with her eyes closed, look like crime scene photos.
Judge Sharpe

 

[That One Guy]

to me your b&w looks too gray.

 

[federerphotography]

I'd like to see a bit more directional light on her face...