"Eternity…”

Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by enezdez, Jun 12, 2018.

  1. enezdez

    enezdez TPF Supporters Supporting Member

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    D850
    f/6.3
    ISO 64
    1/320 Sec.
    24 - 70 mm - f/2.8G
    70 mm

    (Processed In LR, Analog Efex Pro 2, & Color Efex Pro 4)


    20180612-untitled-18-Edit-Edit-Edit-Edit.jpg


    Thanks For Looking Any Comments/Criticism Will Be Appreciated.


    Enezdez


     
  2. Jeff15

    Jeff15 Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Nice moody shot...
     
  3. OldManJim

    OldManJim No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Nice composition but seems a little flat.
     
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    smoke665 TPF Supporters Supporting Member

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    Above ^^^. Based on the settings, I'm assuming this was a mid day shot which may be contributing to the image appearing flat?
     
  5. enezdez

    enezdez TPF Supporters Supporting Member

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    Thank You!

    I totally agree with you!

    Man you are good @smoke665 not quite but it was around 4:00ish PM closer to 5PM & yes I agree it is contributing to the image looking flat...

    I reprocessed with a different crop & now I think it looks better & it"pops" a bit more...or is it wishful thinking on my part?

    20180612-untitled-18-Edit-Edit-Edit-Edit-2.jpg

    Guys tell me what you think?

    Thanks!

    Enezdez
     
  6. smoke665

    smoke665 TPF Supporters Supporting Member

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    It looks better on my end. Don't be afraid to use the "dehaze" slider. Around here on a hot day there's still some haze in the air. Moving the slider to the "+" side will make a noticeable difference in the blacks and whites. As will using the clarity slider.
     
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    OldManJim No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    much better!
     
  8. enezdez

    enezdez TPF Supporters Supporting Member

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    Thanks!

    Thank You!
     
  9. AVargy

    AVargy TPF Noob!

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    I like your shot. It's a nice one. :1219:
     

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