agree with all the above, but it does lack something. And I think the contrast or something might be a little high why is the bricks wavy? Just for a idea. I took a photo a while back (kind of came out like chit but I have it here somewhere if you want to see it) which was taken with people walking in a store under the entrance sign. Because of point of view there was a large glass window on the other side which you could see the opposite exit sign. still weak just throwing it out there to maybe spur some creativity.
again, weak but decent shot.