Fans

[gravy]

too flat? what do you guys think?

 

[his4ever]

yea it seems to be lacking some contrast... I could be wrong tho... more experenced people will tell you if I am wrong. Play aroun with it in levels and see what you get.

 

[boogaguy]

When I look at the picture it isn't the contrast or lack of that bothrs me right away the composition is off. It doesn't work for me. I think if you would have lowered the camera a little it would have had a better effect.

Just my opinion...

 

[ShootHoops]

I agree. This one's missing something.

 

[zendianah]

I'm sorry. I don't like the way this picture is cropped. Maybe a different crop would help with the composition? To me it is flat.

 

[gravy]

ha! don't be sorry! I appreciate the comments! I messed with the curves/levels a bit, and here's what I came up with... obviously, if you don't like the composition, this won't help.

 

[zendianah]

The contrast is better than the first! The fans seem to pop out more than the first.

 

[Peanuts]

The contrast and colour in the second is much improved. To my eyes, I wouldn't mind perhaps a third of a stop or half a stop of exposure - as it looks somewhat underexposed.

 

[gravy]

thanks!