Farmer (Thoughts/Critiques)

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  1. Alexander Dingley

    Alexander Dingley TPF Noob!

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    Would have been better to see more of the tractor I think.
     
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    I rather like it. I might increase contrast slightly and get the darker parts of the tyre closer to black, but I am being finicky.
     
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    Makes me wonder whats going on in this scene. Flowers in the background? Is he plowing the field, etc.

    I second the idea of needing more to the scene.
     
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    It looks a bit unbalanced to me.
    Lots of hood but not really anything definitive.
    I suggest recropping so that the amount of hood balances the driver.
    I also suggest darkening the overbright areas on the shirt andlightening and sharpening the face so it becomes a reasonable center of interest.

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