"Feeled Work" ~ a photo story in haiku

[Msteelio91]

Great work as always, #1 is fantastic

 

[rexbobcat]

I've never really been a fan of haikus (or most poetry for that matter) but I enjoyed the mixing of concepts and creative methods. I think in terms of photos, the first one is my favorite.

 

[hombredelmar]

GREAT SHOTS!!

 

[DanOstergren25]

I've never really been a fan of haikus (or most poetry for that matter) but I enjoyed the mixing of concepts and creative methods. I think in terms of photos, the first one is my favorite.

Yeah, poetry has never been one of my interests either. I'm glad I didn't have to write these.

 

[photoguy99]

I found it interesting that the poet here elected to keep the syllable structure but drop literally everything else about haiku. The result is rather silly and extremely young sounding. Not the photographer's fault, of course.

Why is Dan given a pass for arguing with the critique, which he does every single time? Food for thought.

 

[e.rose]

I found it interesting that the poet here elected to keep the syllable structure but drop literally everything else about haiku. The result is rather silly and extremely young sounding. Not the photographer's fault, of course.

Why is Dan given a pass for arguing with the critique, which he does every single time? Food for thought.

Because he's good.

 

[runnah]

I found it interesting that the poet here elected to keep the syllable structure but drop literally everything else about haiku. The result is rather silly and extremely young sounding. Not the photographer's fault, of course. Why is Dan given a pass for arguing with the critique, which he does every single time? Food for thought.

I plead extreme ignorance when it comes to poetry so I cannot comment.

In my opinion I think a lot of folks here tend to go out of their way to find something negative to say about a photo. When it is done to a great photo it becomes more obvious the real intent behind the comments.

 

[e.rose]

I found it interesting that the poet here elected to keep the syllable structure but drop literally everything else about haiku. The result is rather silly and extremely young sounding. Not the photographer's fault, of course. Why is Dan given a pass for arguing with the critique, which he does every single time? Food for thought.

I plead extreme ignorance when it comes to poetry so I cannot comment.

In my opinion I think a lot of folks here tend to go out of their way to find something negative to say about a photo. When it is done to a great photo it becomes more obvious the real intent behind the comments.

Agreeeeeeeed. :thumbup:

 

[DanOstergren25]

I found it interesting that the poet here elected to keep the syllable structure but drop literally everything else about haiku. The result is rather silly and extremely young sounding. Not the photographer's fault, of course.

Why is Dan given a pass for arguing with the critique, which he does every single time? Food for thought.

If ya don't like my posts, move on. Or don't. You have the option to ignore me, just food for thought.

 

[ristretto]

Myriad is misspelt, 'Myraid of places,'.

 

[DanOstergren25]

Myriad is misspelt, 'Myraid of places,'.

I'll let the author know.

 

[TreeofLifeStairs]

So where were his keys?

 

[DanOstergren25]

So where were his keys?

Not sure...

 

[runnah]

So where were his keys?

The keys were a metaphor for his unfulfilled expectations of what is it to be human.