"Feeled Work" ~ a photo story in haiku

[DanOstergren25]

I'm not really sorry about it if my watermark bugs you. As for the wrinkled white button up, the designer intended it to be wrinkled.

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[runnah]

Well if wrinkled ill fitting shirts is fashionable I am a trendsetter!

I think all are great the stand out is the simple headshot and the other one.

 

[limr29 2]

Agreed - they're all beautiful shots. The first one for me is the standout.

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

I don't care for this models expressions.
He's channeling Zoolander.

 

[DanOstergren25]

I don't care for this models expressions.
He's channeling Zoolander.

Oh really.

I'm going to say not even close, not even in a single one of the shots from this shoot. But thanks.

 

[DanOstergren25]

Agreed - they're all beautiful shots. The first one for me is the standout.

Yeah, the first is the standout for me as well.

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

Ok.

He looks vacant and creepy.

Better?

 

[DanOstergren25]

Ok.

He looks vacant and creepy.

Better?

Yes, actually. Vacant and creepy is far from the zoolander look. But to be honest I don't see vacant and creepy either.

 

[AlanKlein80 19]

Nothing about the pictures. But I always wondered about why and of Haiku work in English. After all, it comes from the Japanese, a language that has its own tenor and beat; different from other languages.

So why should it work in English? Or does it?

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

But to be honest I don't see vacant and creepy either.

That's because you and I are different people.

Of all the images/models you've shown, he just seems emotionless or vapid.
He's handsome, he has great hair, but to me, he is expressionless.
That's what seems "creepy" or "off putting" to me. I can't connect.
Maybe you, and others connect with something there.

I realize for this series it might not fit, but do you have any picture of him smiling, or expressing anything?

 

[e.rose]

I just wanna know where you keep this endless source of beautiful men.

I want to visit that place.

 

[DanOstergren25]

I just wanna know where you keep this endless source of beautiful men.

I want to visit that place.

Portland, San Fran and NYC. All three cities seem to be full of beautiful people.

 

[DanOstergren25]

But to be honest I don't see vacant and creepy either.

That's because you and I are different people.

Of all the images/models you've shown, he just seems emotionless or vapid.
He's handsome, he has great hair, but to me, he is expressionless.
That's what seems "creepy" or "off putting" to me. I can't connect.
Maybe you, and others connect with something there.

I realize for this series it might not fit, but do you have any picture of him smiling, or expressing anything?

Yes, I have pictures of him expressing feeling; they are all posted on this thread.

 

[IzzieK]

I like #1 and #4 Dan...it is a feeling of expressions.

 

[D7K]

But to be honest I don't see vacant and creepy either.

That's because you and I are different people.

Of all the images/models you've shown, he just seems emotionless or vapid.
He's handsome, he has great hair, but to me, he is expressionless.
That's what seems "creepy" or "off putting" to me. I can't connect.
Maybe you, and others connect with something there.

I realize for this series it might not fit, but do you have any picture of him smiling, or expressing anything?

I think the shots themselves are well done, however I have to say I feel the same Bitter here... There's something i find unsettling and I think it is the emotionless expression in this set, to me it also gives a somewhat "Creepy" feel, and that's ok.. to each their own..