Few for C&C

[I'm new to photos]

It's been a while so here are a few from my brother's birthday party!

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or black and white

 

[WilliamH]

The first two have a very snapshot feel to them. The second one is a little out of focus. The thing about the flowers is the left is lit up, but the rightmost portion isn't. The flowers are also a clipped on the right side. I really hope I'm not coming across as being mean. That's not my intention. Just my observations.

 

[I'm new to photos]

The first two have a very snapshot feel to them. The second one is a little out of focus. The thing about the flowers is the left is lit up, but the rightmost portion isn't. The flowers are also a clipped on the right side. I really hope I'm not coming across as being mean. That's not my intention. Just my observations.

Ha no your good I thought on the flowers that made it look cool oh well

On the first one I actually thought looked ok more professional but what does a newb know!

 

[I'm new to photos]

a bit out of focus? too snapshoty?

 

[matfoster]

these are ok. keep going with it...especially the candids.

 

[evie]

the sharpness in all of these is great! number 2 needs more lighting though

 

[I'm new to photos]

the sharpness in all of these is great! number 2 needs more lighting though

ye i know i didnt want to flash them so i didnt should have

 

[Tulsa]

1- what was in that glass she just drank?? not the best expression, looks drunk.
2- its a snapshot, looks like there was some movement, little blurry around the top of her head and her shirt
3,4- not sure what to say... the comp. is bad, poor lighting and drab fake flowers are not very interesting.
Sorry not very positive, but thats how I see them, keep shooting, you will get it!

 

[I'm new to photos]

1- what was in that glass she just drank?? not the best expression, looks drunk.
2- its a snapshot, looks like there was some movement, little blurry around the top of her head and her shirt
3,4- not sure what to say... the comp. is bad, poor lighting and drab fake flowers are not very interesting.
Sorry not very positive, but thats how I see them, keep shooting, you will get it!

what if she was drunk hmm nah jk! ye real flowers are always better and I mean it's little kids I can't get them to stay still. : (