Fire Alarm C&C

[er111a]

what yall think?

 

[PhotoXopher]

Doesn't do anything for me.

 

[SrBiscuit]

not sure im liking this one.
it looks like an experiment in curves adjustment.

 

[thebeatles]

no

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

Try cropping ALL the black space on the left out, and see what you get.

 

[er111a]

Try cropping ALL the black space on the left out, and see what you get.

anyone else?

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

Try cropping ALL the black space on the left out, and see what you get.

anyone else?

Try cropping it, post that, and see what people think.

 

[Inst!nct]

Try cropping ALL the black space on the left out, and see what you get.

anyone else?

Try cropping it, post that, and see what people think.

erilla, you ask for advice, Jeweler gives it to you, you quote it and completely ignore it? whats the point of asking advice then if all you want is praise?

 

[DennyCrane]

Seems over-processed.

 

[nickisonfire]

Are you asking us how you can fix it, or how do we like it?

If your asking how to fix it, I don't think you really can, it's not as if it's overexposed or has bad composure it's just plain boring.

And if you wanna know if I like it, No. I don't.

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

Seems over-processed.

It's a style choice.
It's creative.
He's thinking out of the box more than anyone in this forum.
The art of photography can be more than just "perfect exposure".
I like the the heavy tweak here. I like the contrasting glow it gives.
It kind of gives a sense of, well, alarm.

This guy has had a pretty shaky go in this forum, and took a lot of abuse.
I finally see where his thought process lies, and I for one can appreciate his point of view.

The composition on this image is poor, and detracts from the subject.
I wish the OP would take my suggestion, and look for a better crop, and share that.

me neither

How does that help?
What don't you like? What could make it better?
Learning to give better critiques, also helps YOU as a photographer.

 

[er111a]

Seems over-processed.

It's a style choice.
It's creative.
He's thinking out of the box more than anyone in this forum.
The art of photography can be more than just "perfect exposure".
I like the the heavy tweak here. I like the contrasting glow it gives.
It kind of gives a sense of, well, alarm.

This guy has had a pretty shaky go in this forum, and took a lot of abuse.
I finally see where his thought process lies, and I for one can appreciate his point of view.

The composition on this image is poor, and detracts from the subject.
I wish the OP would take my suggestion, and look for a better crop, and share that.

me neither

How does that help?
What don't you like? What could make it better?
Learning to give better critiques, also helps YOU as a photographer.

sorry took me some time here it is

 

[Derrel]

I see the word "Alarm" down in the depths of the shadows. On top is a bright,overexposed patch of light. Using the old design idea that, "light advances, dark recedes," basically, the thing that stands out the MOST in your photograph is the light,overexposed patch on the top of the alarm box. The "meat" of the photo is very minimal, and the lack of the word "Fire" makes the composition kind of weak; the shot simply lacks impact. It is a "sign shot", a type of photo that bases its impact on photographing a sign or written words,and showing us something about the sign, or making a comment or commentary on the sign. Unfortunately, this photo makes no comment or commentary,and the sign itself is basically illegible.

If you showed this photo to a non-Enligsh speaker, he or she would probably not be impressed with it either.

 

[er111a]

i'm gonna tell you why i don't like it.
i don't like the colours, nor the angle or the subject that's being photographed. it just doesn't make any sense to me, it's too weird of a shot

hahahaha ok i get what your saying we all have things we like