I bet 99% of the people who said it looks odd wouldn't have noticed at all.
Exactly.
Cuz you know, nobody in this world looks odd. Everyones perfect.
I noticed an obvious augmentation in her breasts right away.... They aren't shaped right... I'm a boob guy... its the first place my eyes go. Also, the outline of her breast is very 2 dimentional, It has no depth to it. You can tell something was done to it
It also didn't jump off the page right away, but after really looking at it, there is a lot of detail missing in the back of the hair, you can see detail in the bottom, and about 2" up, but nothing in between. Its also pretty obvious something was done here.
With the comparison of the two.... I don't know if I'm buying how large your irises are.... I never would have noticed it without the comparison picture, but being able to look at the two, the edit almost seems unnaturraly large... I could just be over analyizing though.
As for the rest of it... the lips, chin, nose, neck, shoulders, and upper arm all look very natural....I wouldn't have known one way or the other....Good job there.