All right EckoZero, you did say you were wearing your flame suit. Up until now I think people have been blowing smoke or they lost their glasses. First attempt or not, its not very good. The colors are much too saturated. The whole image has a magenta hue to it. Very noticeable in the sky as well as in the sandy areas which I would expect to be more brownish than white. Just below the people the area is burned out as well as the bottom left corner. This wouldnt happen if it was an HDR. When tone mapping keep your eye on the sky which ghosts out on contrasy images and/or gets a magenta look. Grass is effected too and often becomes nuclear yellow green. I like the composition. I hope HDR doesnt become a catch all phrase for tone mapped images. Its the tone mapping which make an HDR image good or bad. HDR has been around long enough now there are lots of explanations of exactly what it is. Once you understand that, then your images will improve. Now keep in mind what I said here is my opinions based on what I see. Take them for what they are worth. I hope you will stick with it and improve. When you have, you will be even more pleased with your own results.
I agree with Bynx keep on improving and when you look back you will see where you started
and how far you have come throughout your workflow process & presentation.
Gather as much knowledge as you can absorb & have fun transforming your
multiple shot's and processing them for your HDR result. But it has to start with multi Exposures
not just a single standard shot.