Editing preferences aside, I think the composition is lacking. It seems kind of boring the way you have it composed. I'd go for a new angle instead of a straight-on shot of the side.
Keep trying though. HDRs can come out really awesome when you get the hang of them.
I agree the composition is very lacking, which is why I probably went overboard on first image.
I will be able to get some time to take many more shots in the near future.