First high key attempts, CC please

[enzodm]

Today I did a couple of experiments, of which in the meantime I already learned some limit, i.e., I had to start with some higher exposure than I did - I instead worked it in PP, so result is grainy. Next time .
However, here are the two I like more (in order of preference).

#1



#2


Thanks for looking.

 

[C_mo]

I really like them the first one seems over exposed but it suits the picture, her skin tone is too cool for my liking (but to each their own).

I don't like her hand in the second one at all. Other than that I think it is a great shot

 

[BuS_RiDeR]

#1 ... :thumbup:

#2 ... :thumbup:

Good first effort.

 

[enzodm]

Thank you both, I also have some doubt about the hand, but I chose #2 due to eyes. In #1 perhaps the bottom right is slightly overexposed, I'll try to recover.
Actually, both are candids taken in between a series of more posed attempts. But I liked more these two. In #1 she was finishing to laugh after I stumbled upon the couch while coming back to the camera after having adjusted the reflector...

 

[edinchez]

I really really like the first one. I'm not sure about the hand and the facial expression on the second one though, but technically it seems like a great shot. Good job for your first try.

 

[enzodm]

I really really like the first one. I'm not sure about the hand and the facial expression on the second one though, but technically it seems like a great shot. Good job for your first try.

thank you. I look and look, and I agree on the second one, less strong than the first. I have some variant of the first with more hairs, but I decided for this because hairs are too dark for the overall mood.