First Macro lens c&C please

[CorrieMichael]

my first macro lens....my first macro images.......C&C would be great thanks

 

[Murray Bloom]

I think you have more work to do as far as putting your plane of focus where it does the most good and expanding depth of field when required.

The second image (top right) comes closest, while the one below it has no sharp focus at all.

 

[Photographiend]

I like the first and second best. Are you doing ring reversal in these shots?

 

[GDHLEWIS]

They are decent first attempts, I still struggle with getting the focus right on my macro lens. If it were me Id use a higher f-stop if the lighting is available to get a higher DOF.
Otherwise good first attempt.

Keep it up