First Post, C&C

[destroy]

Hi guys, my name's Jesse.
Looking for some C&C on my latest shoot.
First time trying anything with lighting, posing, or a backdrop, so trying to focus on that.

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4. First attempt at high key, strong highlight on elbow and a bit on the face/other arm.


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[Mesoam]

great model, the shots seem a bit flat, i feel that they can be corrected with a little P&P, i feel like the muted clothing doesn't help the model much either

 

[Chris Stegner]

I agree that they are bit flat. Try bumping the brightness and adding some contrast. The skin tones seem to be quite "orange" also. Nice model!

 

[destroy]

Yea 3 and 6 are really on the orange side, when i bumped contrast up the tone changed to more of an orange/warm and i didn't want to shadow, they were also shot with 75w "reveal" bulbs that are by no means studio lighting.

If you were to say the a. best lit, and b. your favorite shot, which ones?
Appreciate the feedback guys.