First Post (NSFW)

[ERImages]

leaving forum

 

[LaFoto]

Heya, ERImages, welcome to ThePhotoForum, thanks for submitting a photo to the forums.

I edited the title to your thread and added the NSFW (not safe for work) to it, since many of us here open TPF at work and might not want to be seen looking at your photo there, you understand.

Any time you post material of the kind, please add the necessary tag to the title, ok?

 

[GTHill]

First, I'll say I am a much better critic than photographer...

The shot looks a bit cool to me, but I tend to like pictures a bit warmer than others.

The model is beautiful but the creases in her side are a bit unflattering which has to do with the pose, not her fitness.

I would have liked to seen her right hand in the shot. Thanks for posting!

GT

 

[MelodySoul]

First, I'll say I am a much better critic than photographer...

The shot looks a bit cool to me, but I tend to like pictures a bit warmer than others.

The model is beautiful but the creases in her side are a bit unflattering which has to do with the pose, not her fitness.

I would have liked to seen her right hand in the shot. Thanks for posting!

GT

Agreed and if she moved her arm in front of her not only would we see her other hand but it would cover the skin creases up.

 

[phoenix_rising]

Not a bad pose, however the model looks a little lost. Do you have any more shots to share?

 

[third_shift|studios]

Not a bad pose, however the model looks a little lost. Do you have any more shots to share?

i agree, i think we need more to get a better assesment of your capabilities to capture the human body. AKA: we want more lingerie model shots!!! WOOT.

Ok, seriously, there's not enough to crit here. I think the crop is too tight and the shadows go too dark; comes off more like a stripper than a victoria's secret ad.