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[amber.ostrander]

Hey Fellow Photo Friends!
I am a photography student, wrapping up my associates degree and pursuing my bachelor's degree in photography. I prefer to shoot people but shoot all types of things. Here are a few of my photos just hoping for some feedback and critique to get better. Keep in mind that these photos were for clients so nothing extremely glamorous or artsy per se. Thanks for your time
Amber

 

[dxqcanada1]

Ok, not bad.

You should stick to a one image per post format.
It is easier on us to make C&C when concentrating on a single topic/image.

#1 seems too much cut out
#2 too much shadow on eyes
#3 too much wall
#4 nice lighting, needs a crop

 

[amber.ostrander]

Thanks! And the leading lines in the wall in the third image are kind of the point of the composition. Noted, though.

 

[dxqcanada1]

Yeah, but my eye gets suck on the out-of-focus area.