First shoot with models #2 Please C&C

[kassad]

Sorry about second post. I just wanted to get some feed back on the shot that didn't quite "pop" for me.


#1

#2

#3

#4

#5

#6

Anyput?


--Kassad

 

[Derrel]

1,2,3,5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> R
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THE camera to Vertical orientation. You discarded the best part of the model by shooting horizontals on those shots. Your last shot should be a horizontal, for obvious reasons, and it looks GOOD as a horizontal, whereas 1,2,3,5 should have been verticals, for obvious reasons.

 

[SrBiscuit]

lolz derrel. good call. per usual.

get some fill light in there.

5 and 6...not sure if shes going for heroin chic, but the eye makeup is awful. granted, this has nothing to do with how you shot her. just throwin that out there.

fill light...thats my suggestion.

 

[8ball]

I like 5 and 6 not a big fan of the others

 

[kassad]

Derrel I looked in the manual and can't find this "Rotate" you speak of. Is it a button on my camera. lol Got it, I must work on my fundemental of compostion. Thanks for the input.

SrBiscuit, I think her and another model were going for the heroin chic look. By the end of the shoot their eye makeup was running down their faces.

8ball what did you like about 5 and 6?

 

[Geaux]

^rotate the camera ... physically.

I kinda like the last one, she looks pretty hot minus the makeup.

What I would change on the last one though, busy background with the covered boat and a tad underexposed.

 

[DanFinePhotography]

#4 looks the best IMO