First time shooting a model...

[thetrue]

Is that some dirty Sanchez action on her upper lip? Just saying.....

 

[QobraKhan]

Nice location, nice pose, I am not sure if the cooking poster adds to the shot or takes away from it. Over all good pic...maybe could of tightened up the shot a little, to make the subject stand out more, other then that great hov

 

[2WheelPhoto]

Is that some dirty Sanchez action on her upper lip? Just saying.....

 

[QobraKhan]

Not bad considering there is no pp, but the background is super distracting. Way too much going on that takes your eye off of the subject.

I agree @ BG
And what is pp if I may ask

 

[QobraKhan]

I figured it out "post processing" thx though

 

[emdiemci]

Dude, way to bring up a 3 and a half year old thread.

lol oops.

 

[Tee]

I didn't do any editing because I didn't feel there was much I could do to improve it honestly.

Liquify tool in Photoshop on her left hip and stomach. Bring it in a little to create a more slender line. I agree with others about a more shallow depth of field but if you have lens limitations, understood. The poster in the background doesn't add to the image as it's not easy to read and is not the main subject and thus a shallow depth of field would not hinder the image. Just my $.02

 

[DiskoJoe]

Bubbles, lol