Rotating the camera would have made that shot of the young lady MUCH more visually rewarding. I know I harp on it all the time, but WHY,exactly, is this shot done as a horizontal?? To include the brick wall over on the left hand side? Because the camera is easier to shoot horizontally?
By shooting with a bad case of horizontalitis, tonight there are two separate photographers here on TPF, you in this thread and another long-time poster in another thread, both offering up shots of the day, and both have been ruined by orienting the camera horizontally on a vertical subject. In the shot of the woman flipping her hair upward--you've hacked her off below the bust AND you have hacked off the top of the beautiful hair she is flipping upward...and so, on the presumptive main subject of this type of shot, the "hair flip shot", your framing does not show the hair entirely, but instead gives us brick wall to the left of her...
Rotate the camera...