first-timer C&C

[anything you synth]

as much critique as possible PLEASE!

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[Turnerea]

I really like the idea of the first one... I think it might have been a lot better at a different time of day- the blown sky in the upper right is a little distracting and its a bit too dark for my tastes near the front wheel (or where the front wheel ought to be- can't tell if its there!)

 

[anything you synth]

yeah, i had a really rough time with the sky in almost every pic i took. when i started to get the sky levels down, everything else would be REALLY dark. how could i have done this differently?

 

[Turnerea]

well I'm no expert, but some ideas would be to find an angle that is good for the composition, but doesn't include the sky, or try at another time of day where the sun would be behind you, so the sky isn't quite so bright.

 

[cherry30]

I love that 3rd one. The first one is okay but I agree with Turnerea about the sky.