First Trash the Dress C&C Please

[tmjjk]

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3
4 All c&c welcome... thank you

 

[Geaux]

Angles....


In none of these images can you tell its a wedding dress.

 

[tmjjk]

Kinda a Faux trash the dress... more like a trash the vintage prom dress we found at goodwill... but I get your point, thanks

 

[tmjjk]

I have many different poses, but I see something wrong in all of them... this one is too centered right?

 

[Geaux]

I don't find her all that centered, and I think the rule of thirds was used nicely....BUT, I would have liked to see the dead space to her right, where she is facing instead of behind her.

 

[tmjjk]

This one I really liked because of the reflection, but I totally overexposed.... is there a way to fix this?

 

[tmjjk]

 

[DiskoJoe]

Not really getting trash the dress that much but she looks hot in the first set.

 

[tmjjk]

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[o hey tyler]

Well I just heard the news today
It seems my aperture is going to change
I close my eyes, imagine 18% gray
Then I focus my lens, and shoot away

With lens wide open
Under the sunlight
Expose for her face
Questionable negative space
With lens wide open...

Well I don't know if I'm ready
To be the 'tog I have to be
I'll take a breath, steady my hand
We chimp in awe, great dynamic range

With lens wide open
Under the sunlight
Expose for her face
Questionable negative space
With lens wide open
Now ISO has been changed
I'll show you bokeh
I'll show you high dynamic range

~Creed

 

[tmjjk]

Wow... o hey tyler... you are talented on so many levels! Brilliant

 

[tmjjk]

Well I just heard the news today
It seems my aperture is going to change
I close my eyes, imagine 18% gray
Then I focus my lens, and shoot away

With lens wide open
Under the sunlight
Expose for her face
Questionable negative space
With lens wide open...

Well I don't know if I'm ready
To be the 'tog I have to be
I'll take a breath, steady my hand
We chimp in awe, great dynamic range

With lens wide open
Under the sunlight
Expose for her face
Questionable negative space
With lens wide open
Now ISO has been changed
I'll show you bokeh
I'll show you high dynamic range

~Creed

So ... my aperture being way too open = over exposed
Misuse of negative space
Bokeh? Good right? and HDR? LOL HELP ... I suck at interpretation

 

[Jaemie]

Is that really a Creed song?

 

[tmjjk]

LOL no... With Arms Wide Open.... Tyler is just extremely creative

 

[Jaemie]

LOL no... With Arms Wide Open.... Tyler is just extremely creative

Oh. I see. Thanks.

I like #8: The light on the water is special and I like her face.