First Trash the Dress C&C Please

[Designer]

I have many different poses, but I see something wrong in all of them... this one is too centered right?

IMO, I think you could crop the right side to a square format, (midway fro the left edge to the model's hair) just to the rh edge of the long slender leaves. (leave them out, IOW) Try it, I think you'll like it.

 

[tmjjk]

Like this....?

 

[michael9000000]

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This photo is simply dreamy!

I want you to know that I respect your tenacity and work ethic... Your photography is improving by leaps and bounds every day... You maybe a relative beginner, but I think you have a gift.

 

[Buckster]

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This is fantastic. Well done!

 

[Ernicus]

:thumbup:

 

[tmjjk]

This photo is simply dreamy!

I want you to know that I respect your tenacity and work ethic... Your photography is improving by leaps and bounds every day... You maybe a relative beginner, but I think you have a gift.

Thank you so much!! And I am so grateful to have found this forum. I learn something everyday here. I have been passionately obsessed with learning more and trying to do this successfully. Yours words mean more than you know!

 

[HughGuessWho101 16]

I am not a people photographer, so I cant give meaningful critique, but you certainly have a good eye and great taste. Keep it up and take advantage of the critique of the many talented people on here and you will be great.

 

[Designer]

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I sure like it.

 

[Forkie]

For a moment there, in the first shots I thought she'd trashed the dress so much it'd fallen off!

 

[Trever1t]

I see much to like about your set here. She's lovely and the poses are natural. #1 is my favorite by far but as already mentioned the framing isn't right and if you look closely you can see the focus is soft. The processing is very nice.

 

[Trever1t]

View attachment 11400 I have many different poses, but I see something wrong in all of them... this one is too centered right?

This one is really gorgeous. Yes, crop should be just behind her so we can see more of the river in front of her.

 

[tmjjk]

Thank you all!! And the dress stayed on the entire time! Lol... And Trever, the first was my favorite too, should I have moved to right and backed up in order to fill the frame more with the rest of her body/dress?

 

[tmjjk]

I am not a people photographer, so I cant give meaningful critique, but you certainly have a good eye and great taste. Keep it up and take advantage of the critique of the many talented people on here and you will be great.

Thank you Hugh... And I am taking as much as you ALL will give me!

 

[HughGuessWho101 16]

I am not a people photographer, so I cant give meaningful critique, but you certainly have a good eye and great taste. Keep it up and take advantage of the critique of the many talented people on here and you will be great.

Thank you Hugh... And I am taking as much as you ALL will give me!

And that attitude will get you a long way!

Keep Shootin'

 

[michael9000000]

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Seriously, I would buy a print of this photo, frame it, and hang it in my house...