Flies Boats and Leaves C&C

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A day spent in the area near home ! an external flash on a wireless device was used on some pictures !

1. Fly caught in a spiderweb
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2. old rusty hinge
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3.fly on a leaf

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4.a fishing boat coming home
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and for kicks, here is an old abandoned building I decided to modify !
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I will put my 2 cents up.

1: I like the composition, even though its centred, nice bokeh helps here. The contrast could be increased along with vibrancy and then the fly itself could do with some sharpening. You'd have a nice soft background and sharp fly with a touch more saturation.

2: Not my cup of tea personally so no comment other than I kinda want the top of the hinge to be in focus as well.

3: Same comments as above for the first fly but leave vibrancy as is or lower a bit. Fly is really too small and insignificant overall though, cropping may help?

4: A boat, nothing of any real interest for me.

5: Middle ground (treeline) is way too dark, unatural green in the field first things that spring to mind.
 
here I go.

1) needs to be mor ein focus. don't center...i like the bokeh though
2) kinda cool. like the texture here.
3) not doing anything for me...as stated above the subject is way to small
4) the bottom need to be cropped.
5) my favorite. well captured. i love the tonality of this photo.
 
Thanks for the comments.

in the first one im not sure where to place it as it is the only subject in the photo?
 

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