Flora and Fauna

[pen]

A few shots from a walk around Humber Colleges arboretum. Let me know what you think. Anything that I can be doing better?


ABC_2616 by PEN Productions / Paul Neale, on Flickr


ABC_2582 by PEN Productions / Paul Neale, on Flickr


ABC_2575 by PEN Productions / Paul Neale, on Flickr


ABC_2566 by PEN Productions / Paul Neale, on Flickr

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[LizardKing]

1st & 3rd are great. I love them.
In my opinion, the 2nd one would be better without those brown hairs out of focus on top. It only adds confusion, I think.
Now, for the last one, the background should be less sharp... more out of focus... This one has too much detail and confuses the eye about where to look.

Just a newbie's opinion though... :mrgreen:

Regards,
LizardKing

 

[pen]

Thanks for the input. Being a beginner doesn't mater as long as you can explain why you like something or not.

I might play with the last to see if I can isolate the in-focus flower more

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