florida vacation, continued!

jdmwannabee · Dec 11, 2008

here are a few shots i forgot to put in my first post. feel free to c&c, but these pics were all taken before i knew anything about photography.

#1.by the pool

#2.sail boat

#3.i did a little work to this one but ill just wait and see if anyone can tell anything.

ill post the original if anyone asks to see it.

#4.again not a perfect pic but one i really like. my dad!

actually i think my mom took this last one^^^^

#5. i did a little art work on a rainy day.

#6.bigger pic of my drawing.

thanks again for looking! please let me know what you think!

chrisburke · Dec 11, 2008

you are posting WAYYY to many pics... if you want decent CC, you should only be posting 2-3 pics.. not posting 10 in one thread, then starting another thread with another 6 pics... its just to much for people to give you GOOD cc...

Harmony · Dec 11, 2008

These all seem quite 'snapshottish' to me.

That being said:
1. Everything seems to be softly focused to me.
2. Way too many blown out parts on the sea.
3. Composition doesn't really make me interested, and half the pelicans aren't in focus.
4. Blown sky, areas with highlights in the left side of his face, crooked horizon.
5 & 6. ...are pictures of a drawing. Might like 5 better if everything was in focus...