For your assessment :D

[Frequency]

for your C&C please



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[Danmunro_nz]

Love it. Very cool. Where is this?

 

[Fred Berg]

There's a fair bit of noise, which is especially noticeable in the sky. Also, there's quite a bit of tilt (towards the right), and the compopsition isn't quite centred with more clipped off the left side than the right. A very nice subject, though, with lots of interest.

 

[mswiech]

The lean in the building is throwing it all off for me. Very noisy picture as well. Did you try and correct that in like LR or PS to get rid of it a little?

 

[Edgar_P]

Like Fred Berg mentioned, there is a noticeable amount of noise in the picture. Also, im not quite sure if I like the angle itwas taken at or if it is just the fact the the colors of the building fade towards the top. The croping is not perfectly centered either. Some photoshoping could really make this a better image.

 

[Frequency]

Love it. Very cool. Where is this?

Thank you Danmunro; this is from Chamundi Temple, Mysure, Karnataka, South India

There's a fair bit of noise, which is especially noticeable in the sky. Also, there's quite a bit of tilt (towards the right), and the compopsition isn't quite centred with more clipped off the left side than the right. A very nice subject, though, with lots of interest.

Thank you FB; all your points are valid; i have attempted to corre t them; thank you

The lean in the building is throwing it all off for me. Very noisy picture as well. Did you try and correct that in like LR or PS to get rid of it a little?

Thank you; i am posting below a modified one

Like Fred Berg mentioned, there is a noticeable amount of noise in the picture. Also, im not quite sure if I like the angle itwas taken at or if it is just the fact the the colors of the building fade towards the top. The croping is not perfectly centered either. Some photoshoping could really make this a better image.

Thank you Edgar; please see below

 

[Frequency]

Please let me know your feeling about this....


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[manaheim]

Please let me know your feeling about this....
http://www.flickr.com/photos/flashbackr/8138550008/

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Still looks like it has tilt/perspective issues.

Also that sky is unfortunate... Try to do some major contrast adjustments and maybe swing it more blue by just a touch.

 

[Frequency]

Ohhhhh... i give up

Who will do that for me?

 

[Frequency]

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[Edgar_P]

Please let me know your feeling about this....


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Much better. The sky looks much better and so does the color. How did you saturate the colors? Are saturating the entire image or on a gradient that is dense near the top of the image?

 

[Frequency]

Thank you Edgar; i used bucket paint to fill the sky

 

[The_Traveler]

Frequency, I think this is way over-sharpened.

 

[Frequency]

Thank you Lew; what you said is 100% true ... i was wondering why it was not pointed out so far

Thank you

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[Trever1t]

Wonderful structure! I could spend a week just looking at all that detail!