four new ones for cc

[er111a]

as always thank you for looking and your thoughts
1)

2)

3)

4)

 

[D-B-J]

i really only like the last one, and i wish there was a deeper dof. Still, a nice shot.

 

[JeffieLove]

#3 is my favorite (good job backing on the PS)

I like #4 as well, but it seems a bit OOF to me...

 

[Derrel]

I like the second shot, the flower shot: I wish you would rotate it a couple of degrees clockwise, to straighten up the stem of the flower. Overall, I think that's kind of a neat photo.

 

[er111a]

thanks y'all, im surprised no one like #1

 

[er111a]

can I hear some thoughts on #1?

 

[M.Powell]

On number one I think it would have been better had the one flower completely bloomed. As it is, there is too much of the same color, not a lot of pop coming from that one tiny bloom, well almost bloom. Maybe once it's fully bloomed, zoom in a little closer and don't bullseye it maybe....

You asked so I said what I felt... but not a pro so take it for what it's worth...lol Just what I would try..
I like the others a lot

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

Why did you shoot the first one in shutter priority, 1/2000 f/1.4?

Try shooting this kinda stuff with aperture priority. That way you are making a creative choice with DoF.
Shooting in shutter priority takes away your control of DoF.

Shutter priority is more for sports and moving things.

 

[JeffieLove]

Why did you shoot the first one in shutter priority, 1/2000 f/1.4?

Try shooting this kinda stuff with aperture priority. That way you are making a creative choice with DoF.
Shooting in shutter priority takes away your control of DoF.

Shutter priority is more for sports and moving things.

I just wanted to mention that I figured that out all by myself a few weeks ago haha!

/end boast

 

[er111a]

haha congrats sarah and good to know bitter

 

[Stormchase]

1 seems oof to me. might just be me and as bitter said do a little DoF on it and maybe a little color diversity. 2 is pretty cool. Glad you toned down the PP on your posts. 3 looks a little blurry but a nice shot. 4 I think you have more focus on the right flower and not the bigger subject. maybe stop down a little and go for more in focus.
All pretty good tho i enjoyed them.

 

[er111a]

thank you

 

[er111a]

yall arnt just joking right?

 

[leftypony]

haha, I had to come look at this thread after the reference to you in "make your photos look pro"

 

[er111a]

haha, I had to come look at this thread after the reference to you in "make your photos look pro"

haha could you atleast have c&ced?