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Austin Greene

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Ok, this is what keeps me up until midnight when I should be studying for what is arguably the most important test I'll ever take in my academic career.

After reading folks' feedback on some other images I posted, I went and scoured through those I had passed over at first glance. Found this guy, decided to give it a bit of a go with the feedback folks had in mind. I won't be shooting this weekend (I'll be studying), so I won't get to round up some fresh exposures until late next week.

Thoughts?


From Beyond
by TogaLive, on Flickr

Edit: Thought I'd toss up a BW conversion. I don't really like it much, but I thought it'd be worth a go.

From Beyond (B&W)
by TogaLive, on Flickr
 
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Intelligent look, but I get the feeling I'm not sure what I'm looking at when it actually all seems quite clear. Exactly what it looks like is what actuality it looks like. The Time stretching is nice but often feels like a pause almost like you compressed the timing.
 
Its good I think but I wonder about the angle and the colors, it looks a bit technicolor?
 
Its good I think but I wonder about the angle and the colors, it looks a bit technicolor?

Not sure what you mean by angle, the shot is level. Perhaps you mean the composition? As for the colors, this was an experiment in just that, toying with the colors a bit. That said, the changes made only really affect the sky.
 
Love the colors. Love the clarity. Love the movement. But ... What's the subject? To me it feels like 98% of a final photo, and just missing something to draw me in and hold me.

Jake
 

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