Gabby

[Cactiflower]

1.
471_m by Lucky 7 Photography, on Flickr

2.
468_m by Lucky 7 Photography, on Flickr

3.
464_m by Lucky 7 Photography, on Flickr

Here are a few from a shoot I did yesterday. Would love some feedback!!!! Thanks for looking!

 

[DiskoJoe]

Some framing issues in 1 and 2. To close on the left side. Needs some more space. Your choice of locations is poor. Looks like the side of a random road. And is she wearing a curtain? Thats what it looks like. ANd whats up with the mask? It doesnt really fit the motif at all.

 

[cgipson1]

^have to agree with DiskoJoe.. I don't get it! Beautiful model, too... but the mask is kind of goofy!

 

[Tony S]

Soemthing just seems really uncomfortable about the look and her look in this.


#1.. shooting up her nose and at the bottom of the chin does not work and it's tilted as evident by the background.

#2 the shoulder is too prominant and is hunched forward in a not very feminine pose, again tilted with obvious background lines.

#3 the leg out looks really contrived, and the overall view makes the outfit look unflattering as it does not fit the model.... and the green material looks out of place.

 

[Cactiflower]

I'm not sure what the dress was exactly. Did the shoot for a fashion design student. She picked the model and theme I just showed up to take pictures. Lol. Thanks for the feedback on the posing its very helpful!!!

 

[Tony S]

Yikes.... I'm betting that wasn't a good grade for the student. :er:

 

[DiskoJoe]

Well I'll give you a little more credit since you didn't pick the outfit or location.

 

[Cactiflower]

Yeah it was an interesting shoot to say the least not sure what she got but I wouldn't have worn that dress lol. I did get some shots of the model afterwards in some normal clothes lol I'll post them.

 

[Cactiflower]

1.
glowin_m by Lucky 7 Photography, on Flickr

2.
704_m by Lucky 7 Photography, on Flickr

3.
805_marked by Lucky 7 Photography, on Flickr

4.
500_marked by Lucky 7 Photography, on Flickr

 

[Bogs]

i like the first one. it's nice with her hair being backlit and such. you weren't using any reflectors, were you?

 

[DiskoJoe]

Now this second set is pretty hot. This is how your supposed to shoot a lady. First one her hair is a bit too blue which isnt bad but not real cohesive for the rest of the set but much better then the set above. Too bad you clipped 3. On 4 I wish you hadnt clipped her head but it doesnt ruin it.

Man that dress above from the fashion student really made this chick look horrible. I would have never guessed she had all this body hiding under that curtain of a dress.

 

[Cactiflower]

No I did not use a reflector should have but left it at home. Yeah I was so pissed I chopped 3 but it happens. Thanks for the feedback!!!!

 

[ReganP]

I really like the second set, especially the first one! It's weird, she almost looks like a completely different person. The second set is much warmer, whereas the first set has a bit of a grey/dead feel to me especially the third one, which seems a bit depressing.