Gazing women

[Benjo255]

 

[Derrel]

I like their interaction and their line of gaze, and the low camera angle, but the woman in the back distracts. I think this needs to be re-processed a bit to maximize its potential.

 

[Benjo255]

It's totally unprocessed. Jpg straight out of camera. May be I could crop her out...

 

[Derrel]

I was thinking to dodge the hair on the woman on the right, and the lady in the lower right corner could be burned down quite a bit, so she'd just be darker and less-obvious.

 

[TreeofLifeStairs]

I thought she added to the feel that it was a busy city area. Still distracting though.