General Critique #3 Please

[OGsPhotography]

Heyas,

I got a useable shot I think! Thanks for all your help so far.

General Critique would be appreciated.

File was too big, need to resize... whats the file size limit? I put this at 50% export through Lr.

OG

 

[The_Traveler]

Nicely sharp, sweet face.
A bit of dirt on the edge of mouth and hair across face but this is a child and that is just charming.
Over-exposed quite a bit, tilted and off to one side.
Great start, you have the fundamentals down but you can do better with a model that looks that cute.

 

[Designer]

I disagree, The_Traveler, if he had the fundamentals down, then he would have made the corrections that you mentioned. I do agree with your critique.

 

[OGsPhotography]

Thanks Traveler

When I straighten the photo, should I use her eyes to level it? I never thought of that in the crop.

You have an eye for detail, I could take the hair out in Ps but the dirt lol her mother didn't even see it.

I took the exposure down a bit and tried the crop.


OG