Give Me Back My Bullets

[namaste_lv]

Starting to work out a little table top studio to work with on some small objects. C&C welcome.




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Josh

"Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep."
Scott Adams

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[--ares--]

I feel like the color balance is slightly off, its hard to tell. Otherwise its a good composition.

 

[namaste_lv]

I feel like the color balance is slightly off, its hard to tell. Otherwise its a good composition.

Maybe I need to push the colors a little more out of reality then, if it feels off. So it looks more deliberate. Was trying to play with a blue/orange palette.

 

[Josh66]

Looks a little cluttered to me...

Of the 4 cartridges only one is entirely in the frame, and it's dangerously close to the edge.

I would maybe lose the one on the left edge, and back off enough that the three remaining ones are in the frame. You also might consider stopping down a little more to get the one laying down (pointing left) all the way inside the DOF.