Goosebump - First post for C&C

[Beccy]

Hi All,

Long time lurker here! I've rarely posted before, and never with a photograph attached (so bear with me if I get the upload wrong...), but I have made a pact with myself to post more of my work up - for two reasons; firstly because I feel some critique and comments would help me to improve, and secondly as motivation to continue shooting even though my walls are full and I'm running out of friends willing to pose for me!

So... here is my first offering for C&C... please feel free to be as brutal as you want to be! I'd rather you were honest...

 

[Beccy]

Did I post it a bit small? I'll try a bit larger

 

[brettmc]

I think its a great idea, interesting subject. I'm having trouble finding the focus point I think this one needs some more DOF to keep her face from being blurry

 

[Beccy]

I did wonder about that brettmc... have been practicing with shallow dof recently, so thats kind of why the dof is shallow, tried to focus on the goosebumpy arm. But when I uploaded from the camera I did think on the whole the pic would have been better if her face was focused too.