First Portrait Attempt

[Anubis]

Looking for a bit of constructive C&C on my first attempt at portraiture please. Technical info; ISO250, f4.5, 1/80, 70mm, RAW.

Cheers,

A

 

[PhilGarber]

Cool man, I like it. I love how the eyes sparkle. The DOF could have been a tad thinner..but that's just being nit-picky.

 

[musicaleCA]

The only thing I really don't like is all that skin shine, from what I'm assuming is a strobe of some sort. It's not very attractive. >.<

 

[Anubis]

Thanks for the feedback!

I used a gold reflector to light him, I think I held it a little too close hence the skin shine. I need an assistant to hold it further away next time

A.