Grave Stare

[DeadEye]

Critique please.

 

[nealjpage]

I find the top of the adjacent stone to be very distracting.

 

[DeadEye]

I find the top of the adjacent stone to be very distracting.

Thank You I will try to remove it.:thumbup:

Edit.

 

[nealjpage]

much better! how'd you do that with so little cropping?

 

[DeadEye]

much better! how'd you do that with so little cropping?

PSP clone tool.

 

[Ronin Vincent]

Very nice pic,was it her wedding day? If it was she seems to be having 2nd thoughts about it.

 

[harrisoncj]

i find the plant in the center very distracting.

 

[Miaow]

I like it It sorta makes me wonder what she's thinking off and who's grave it is for her to be looking at it like that....

 

[DeadEye]

Very nice pic,was it her wedding day? If it was she seems to be having 2nd thoughts about it.

Well Its kind of a long story but here it goes. No not her wedding day she is an aspiring young model that I was lucky to work with. It all started with trying to set up a a big Trash the Dress photoshoot. I posted in my local town forum and had LOTS of people say they wanted to join in. So I set up a really nice location an old horse farm near my home. The owner wanted me to do a spiritual themed set in the graveyard as It has history back to early 1800s. Well all the poster/ Pmers in my local forum are 10 feet tall behind the keyboard and a no show at the Trash the dress shoot. I had two photographers and one Model and three other people who showed to be in the shoot . One dressed as a farmer in coveralls and one as a priest. The key model for the shot on horseback with the farmer and priest never happened as she was a no show. So I salvaged what I could and the shoot went on with the one Model. I got the graveyard shots mostly on film Illford FP4 and the processor ran it through C41 so I lost them All…………….After the film was out I shot digital as backup and glad I did. The other photog shot film in the graveyard also but Iv not yet seen the Images. He also shot Infra red . The model was not into horses or mud or water so it kinda turned into a portfolio dress shoot. All in all it was fun except for loosing the Illford pictures.