Gravity of the Situation

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[kundalini]

There is one line that pulls this all together. Well done.

 

[camz]

Fed, to me I think it can go with a tighter crop by getting rid of some of the lower left negative space or wooden planks. In other words, top left corner of the crop should start on the edge of the vertical window frame and lower left corner of the crop start at the current plank line but pushed inside more. I don't know if I'm making sense I can't describe it any better....I would do otherwise but can't edit the photo..lol.

Good concept.

 

[invisible]

There is one line that pulls this all together. Well done.

Thank you, sir.

Fed, to me I think it can go with a tighter crop by getting rid of some of the lower left negative space or wooden planks. In other words, top left corner of the crop should start on the edge of the vertical window frame and lower left corner of the crop start at the current plank line but pushed inside more. I don't know if I'm making sense I can't describe it any better....I would do otherwise but can't edit the photo..lol.

Good concept.

Thank you for the feedback. Please do go ahead and edit

 

[Trever1t]

There is one line that pulls this all together. Well done.

my eyes were drawn to it immediately, to make sense of it all. :thumbup:

 

[camz]

Hey Fed,

I tried to go tighter and have the upper left corner start at the window frame however with the same 4x6 crop it's too tight on the right side - pretty much this is the closest manifest to what I was trying to describe to bring simplicity and focus back to the objects on the window ledge. IMHO.

 

[invisible]

my eyes were drawn to it immediately, to make sense of it all. :thumbup:

Thank you

I tried to go tighter and have the upper left corner start at the window frame however with the same 4x6 crop it's too tight on the right side - pretty much this is the closest manifest to what I was trying to describe to bring simplicity and focus back to the objects on the window ledge. IMHO.

I like what you did, thank you for taking the time. I particularly like that the bottle ended up in the middle. The one thing I don't like is that somehow it seems that the top of the bottle ended up too close to the top margin – did you crop some off the top of the image? Or is this just an optical effect resulting from your cropping of the left and bottom sides?

 

[KenC]

I like the shot overall, but what my eye really is drawn to, almost to the exclusion of all else, is that twisted, rusted doorknob and plate. That is wonderful! I think I would actually be happier looking at a close-up of that alone at the same angle. You don't seem to do close-ups, or at least you don't post them, but some of your images contain some amazing objects that I want to have a much better look at.

 

[camz]

my eyes were drawn to it immediately, to make sense of it all. :thumbup:

Thank you

I tried to go tighter and have the upper left corner start at the window frame however with the same 4x6 crop it's too tight on the right side - pretty much this is the closest manifest to what I was trying to describe to bring simplicity and focus back to the objects on the window ledge. IMHO.

I like what you did, thank you for taking the time. I particularly like that the bottle ended up in the middle. The one thing I don't like is that somehow it seems that the top of the bottle ended up too close to the top margin – did you crop some off the top of the image? Or is this just an optical effect resulting from your cropping of the left and bottom sides?

Yes I had to take some off the top as there wasn't enough room on the right plane of the shot to maintain the same crop factor resulting on a tight space for the objects on the ledge. Preferably maintaining the headroom that you originally provided combined with the modified crop - I think it's an amazing shot bud.

 

[invisible]

I like the shot overall, but what my eye really is drawn to, almost to the exclusion of all else, is that twisted, rusted doorknob and plate. That is wonderful! I think I would actually be happier looking at a close-up of that alone at the same angle. You don't seem to do close-ups, or at least you don't post them, but some of your images contain some amazing objects that I want to have a much better look at.

Thanks for the feedback, Ken. In the last year or two I've been shooting more and more with my wide-angle lenses. This image, for example, was shot at 24mm – mostly because I was too lazy to switch from my UWA to my mid-range zoom. As a result, obviously, my images have been showing less and less detail. I see where you are coming from though, in particular knowing what your own style is

Yes I had to take some off the top as there wasn't enough room on the right plane of the shot to maintain the same crop factor resulting on a tight space for the objects on the ledge. Preferably maintaining the headroom that you originally provided combined with the modified crop - I think it's an amazing shot bud.

That explains it Thanks very much once again.