Gorgeous model. I would have gone for a bit more light on the darker side of her face though personally. Also something I remember reading ages ago but have never had to deal with personally; Her pupils are massive, it looks like she's trippin out. Obviously it was quite dark where you were shooting which causes this. You could shine a torch or something like that onto her face just before taking the shot to narrow her pupils a bit and show more of that nice green (brown?) colour in her eyes.