Greenery and Leaves

[blackphoenix]

 

[bulldurham]

My feeling from the works you've posted that I've seen to date, there is more of a randomness to your shooting than a direction. I like to see "reason" in a work instead of looking at an image and thinking, "eh?"

 

[blackphoenix]

My feeling from the works you've posted that I've seen to date, there is more of a randomness to your shooting than a direction. I like to see "reason" in a work instead of looking at an image and thinking, "eh?"

understandable. right now i'm just practicing cause i don't have the means to do much but shoot random objects. I want to develop actual photoseries and such and put stories behind my work. thank you for your comment! I appreciate it!

 

[bulldurham]

Work on better composition for the random objects.

 

[blackphoenix]

Ok, thank you!

 

[bulldurham]

With these edits, the primary focal points become the stars of the shot and not seemingly afterthoughts. Simple crops, one levels adjustment in each and one color adjustment in each. Both images were about color and their surrounding compliments.

 

[blackphoenix]

With these edits, the primary focal points become the stars of the shot and not seemingly afterthoughts. Simple crops, one levels adjustment in each and one color adjustment in each. Both images were about color and their surrounding compliments.

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i appreciate edits. they're beautiful! this is really helping!