Greetings. Cards. Greeting cards. Oh, and C&C.

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  1. Tight Knot

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    Hi everyone,

    Looking for some feedback on a few greeting cards I'm working on. I would love to hear your feedback.

    The horse ones are for sympathy cards (any other uses you can think of?) and th4e rest, well, I believe they're self explanatory :allteeth:.


     
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    Sympathy card are nearly always bright and cheerful, not dark. The reds and predominant blacks in yours and especially the one with the two heads don't really project the sort of image that sells well. You don't really send get well soon messages of a sunset combined with the riders of the apocalypse as your message may be mis-understood. ;)

    Also I do not see or understand why you have combined two images that bear no relationship to each other either in shape, colour, context or composition. Why is there a horse looking at me while I gaze at the sunset over the surf? Why is there a ghost of a horse standing on a foreshore and what is its relationship to the location? (Why are you sending me a sympathy card with a picture of a ghost? ;))

    You also need to look at the colours on all of them. Black is for mourning, red is for fire and passion, see where I'm going?
    Lamp post with snow, why is the sky that colour? The yellow/orange glow of the lamplight against blue and white of snow in the sky (their usual colours?) would work as a colour theme, snow falling from a dirty orange sky doesn't work on so many levels. ;)

    You really need to look at basic colour theory. In a small card you need to be able to produce something that is visually pleasing, something with a clear message, and something that is visually balanced.
    You also need to understand your processing as you are over-saturating the colours through saturation/vibrance/contrast controls. These are not easy to reproduce in a printing process.

    The happy holidays for instance is predominantly dark and black, the white champagne bubbles are near black! Every other colour is either fully saturated or close to full saturation and so will be difficult to reproduce. With so much saturated colour in the image you may ask yourself why it looks so dull and colourless, you may ask why anybody would associate "happy" with so much black? ;)

    Greetings cards are mass market items. You need to be simple and precise with your message, and simple and precise with your design. Your colours need to be proofed and in gamut of the volume printing process to be used. Print your's out and place them with your christmas cards as they would be in a shop. Which would you buy?

    Sorry. :(
     
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    Hi Tim,

    First of all thank you very much for your detailed, open, honest and candid critique.

    I'm not sure that I agree with everything you said, I'm going to have to spend some time doing more market research (and getting my ego out of the way :eek::allteeth:). But either way, your comments certainly help to keep my eyes open, and hopefully on the right track.
    I'll post back once I've had more of a chance to study your critique in depth.

    Thanks again,

    Bruce
     
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    I'm going to have to agree with Tim. As someone who buys a lot of cards, I dislike all of these except for maybe the winter lamp post in the snow. The first one of the horse just looks odd. And the font on the two, just looks amateur. I know there is big business in greeting cards. But these, I don't think make the cut.
     
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    Hi Barb,

    Thanks for the feedback.
    I guess with every new venture, there comes a learning curve, and in this case it appears like a rather steep one. I'll have to keep trying and will post more as time goes by to get more feedback. Other than the things Tim mentioned, and the font issues, is there anything else you see that could/should be changed or done differently?

    Thanks,

    Bruce
     
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    I think Tim nailed it pretty well. I don't like the lump of snow on the light post. It actually took me a bit to figure out what it was. For sympathy cards, something a little brighter and an image that is clearer would be my preference. Something peaceful instead of dark and see through horses.

    Other than that, I think Tim's advice is pretty spot on.
     
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    Hi Barb,

    Thanks for your insight.
    Not that it necessarily makes it any more marketable, but the horse cards, were aimed at the horse owner crowd who have lost a horse, and I figured that it would resonate with them.
    Maybe I should show them to some of my horse owning friends (and have them laugh at me :) ) to see what they think .

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    Look at sympathy cards and you will find that they nearly all use pastels and towards cool/calming colours. If you look at the motives and symbolism you will also find them to be uplifting or comforting with reference/motion upwards.
    Reds are associated with fire, passion and anger. The setting sun goes down, goes out, it signifies the coming of dark and danger.
    Remember if you send a card of sympathy it's nearly always to someone you don't know intimately and you want to be absolutely sure that your message is clear and won't upset.

    I think that your image re-posted below is the best by far, but look at the image. Bare leafless trees, passionate dark angry colour, the sun setting... If your horse is still alive it's excitement and danger, but I wouldn't send it to someone who's horse has just died. ;)

    Below it is an image I took of "Kiss" and processed for my partner after Kiss had to be put down following a freak accident. I include it not because I think it is better than yours, but because it is the opposite of yours. Although your images show that you know your way around image editing, all of you images also show the effects of only positive movement of those contrast/clarity and saturation controls. Heavy contrast, increased black, and saturated colour. My image is all about soft contrast and you'll be hard pressed to find any colour in it above 50% saturation.

    Which is the most exciting, and which is the most comforting?

    Download mine and compare it against all of yours and you'll see how all your images are similar in saturated colour, heavy contrast and increased black content.

    2 horse heads on sunset over Har Bental plus border.jpg

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    I hear. There's a lot more psychology that goes into this than I gave it credit for. Stupid me. Makes a lot of sense.
    Thanks a bunch for your help.
    Cheers.

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    I like hers. Except for the rainbow one. But if you'll notice, although the horses are dark in hers, there is light as well. And the horses are clearly defined and fit into the scene. It's places where you would actually find horses. I find a few of them a tad dark but overall, they are nice.
     
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    What would you recommend I change with the fonts?
     

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