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Handful of shots that I like C&C please

nateridesbikes

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Everything shot with a stock D3000.

Im fairly happy with these but I feel like there is room for improvement

DSC_0061 by nateridesbikes, on Flickr



DSC_0059 by nateridesbikes, on Flickr



DSC_0048 by nateridesbikes, on Flickr



DSC_0041 by nateridesbikes, on Flickr



DSC_0039 by nateridesbikes, on Flickr



DSC_0031 by nateridesbikes, on Flickr

There was a lot of luck involved here. I had the shutter set on "bulb" and was just winging it. Also not using a tripod

DSC_0022 by nateridesbikes, on Flickr

This one was about a week later so there wasn't AS much luck involved. Again no tripod as you can tell.

DSC_0076 by nateridesbikes, on Flickr

Nothing fancy here but I think its a pretty clean photo

DSC_0019 by nateridesbikes, on Flickr
 
#3 is the best of the car set but it lacks luster. The car (main subject?) is only 1/4 of the frame...get closer and try shooting from an angle slightly forward.
 
Very cool firework shots! The others are just kind of ehhh to me. Sorry that I can't give a better critique :( With the car shots, it's like you have to guess what the main subject is.
 
You posted way to many and didn't number them, which is a big part of why you're not getting more responses.

I recommend you post one at a time.

All the car shots are under exposed, have poor compostion. and/or insifficient (to small in the frame) subject image scale.

Visit Guidelines for Better Photographic Composition. for some basic info on visual image composition.

For basic digital photography tutorials visit Digital Photography Tutorials
 
Unfortunately I agree with KmH on all points. Try again.

The first fireworks shot is nice, these all kinda feel like P&S Snapshots though...
 

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