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thanks.... you are right:)

Please straighten your horizons/lines and number your pics as well. I think I prefer the second and would like the last if it was straightened.
 
#2 and #4 are my favs with some notes...

Can you work on the overexposure a bit for #2 and the leveling for #4?

I think these two are the best Family Momentos and what I would buy multiples of for my money after a bit more work.
 
There is some strange writing appearing across your shots. Ghosts? sign writer?

Sorry. In a silly mood. I think the family gets lost on the background. To much going on there.
 
Is called WATERMARK :)

There is some strange writing appearing across your shots. Ghosts? sign writer?

Sorry. In a silly mood. I think the family gets lost on the background. To much going on there.
 
I'm really not into heavy C&C. because I am probably my own worst critic. But this one caught my eye and I wanted to comment. In photo #1, you literally drew a line between the family members. If the hand rail were used as a prop, someone's arms on it, it might have been a bit different. I think it just physically separates the family into two parts. And that may have well been your intention, parents and kids, I don't know. In my profession in LE was are taught to keeep a barrier between us and the bad guy for our own protection, so I may be hyper sensitive to the idea and it just stuck out to me. Let someone else comment too about it.

And I agree, #1 & #3 the faces are too small. #2 Is really great, but as a nit-pick is could have used a softer background.


Keep up with the good work.
 
I agree with Radio Rick. It seems the other shots keep the kids at a distance from mom and dad too. I have no idea if that means anything, heck, I'm an engineer and like to observe even tho I have no idea what it means (if anything). Hope you are not offended at the observation.

I'm really not into heavy C&C. because I am probably my own worst critic. But this one caught my eye and I wanted to comment. In photo #1, you literally drew a line between the family members. If the hand rail were used as a prop, someone's arms on it, it might have been a bit different. I think it just physically separates the family into two parts. And that may have well been your intention, parents and kids, I don't know. In my profession in LE was are taught to keeep a barrier between us and the bad guy for our own protection, so I may be hyper sensitive to the idea and it just stuck out to me. Let someone else comment too about it.

And I agree, #1 & #3 the faces are too small. #2 Is really great, but as a nit-pick is could have used a softer background.


Keep up with the good work.
 
The lighting looks really great. Are you using some fill flash? On camera or off?
 
not offended I appreciate cc.. like to see other points of view..thanks...

I agree with Radio Rick. It seems the other shots keep the kids at a distance from mom and dad too. I have no idea if that means anything, heck, I'm an engineer and like to observe even tho I have no idea what it means (if anything). Hope you are not offended at the observation.

I'm really not into heavy C&C. because I am probably my own worst critic. But this one caught my eye and I wanted to comment. In photo #1, you literally drew a line between the family members. If the hand rail were used as a prop, someone's arms on it, it might have been a bit different. I think it just physically separates the family into two parts. And that may have well been your intention, parents and kids, I don't know. In my profession in LE was are taught to keeep a barrier between us and the bad guy for our own protection, so I may be hyper sensitive to the idea and it just stuck out to me. Let someone else comment too about it.

And I agree, #1 & #3 the faces are too small. #2 Is really great, but as a nit-pick is could have used a softer background.


Keep up with the good work.
 
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