adrianakyan
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- #16
lol! omg i got that shoot too!
Please straighten your horizons/lines and number your pics as well. I think I prefer the second and would like the last if it was straightened.
I think i remember you from other group.. I have seen your little boy pic..
I have close up pics.. too... but i really wanted the whole scene here..
I had a feeling you did...
In #1 and #3 the family is so small, they almost don't look like the subject.
There is some strange writing appearing across your shots. Ghosts? sign writer?
Sorry. In a silly mood. I think the family gets lost on the background. To much going on there.
I think they are all beautiful. Whats your PP?
In #1 and #3 the family is so small, they almost don't look like the subject.
Agreed. A rec-rop might be in order.
I'm really not into heavy C&C. because I am probably my own worst critic. But this one caught my eye and I wanted to comment. In photo #1, you literally drew a line between the family members. If the hand rail were used as a prop, someone's arms on it, it might have been a bit different. I think it just physically separates the family into two parts. And that may have well been your intention, parents and kids, I don't know. In my profession in LE was are taught to keeep a barrier between us and the bad guy for our own protection, so I may be hyper sensitive to the idea and it just stuck out to me. Let someone else comment too about it.
And I agree, #1 & #3 the faces are too small. #2 Is really great, but as a nit-pick is could have used a softer background.
Keep up with the good work.
I agree with Radio Rick. It seems the other shots keep the kids at a distance from mom and dad too. I have no idea if that means anything, heck, I'm an engineer and like to observe even tho I have no idea what it means (if anything). Hope you are not offended at the observation.
I'm really not into heavy C&C. because I am probably my own worst critic. But this one caught my eye and I wanted to comment. In photo #1, you literally drew a line between the family members. If the hand rail were used as a prop, someone's arms on it, it might have been a bit different. I think it just physically separates the family into two parts. And that may have well been your intention, parents and kids, I don't know. In my profession in LE was are taught to keeep a barrier between us and the bad guy for our own protection, so I may be hyper sensitive to the idea and it just stuck out to me. Let someone else comment too about it.
And I agree, #1 & #3 the faces are too small. #2 Is really great, but as a nit-pick is could have used a softer background.
Keep up with the good work.