HDR again?

[unicore]

comment plss..

 

[Provo]

Although the 2nd image has some areas that need working like the sky where it has dark blue patches and the planes wings have a strong magenta tint to it. Oh I can't leave out the dark areas. But despite that I kind of like them both to be honest
that 1st one reminds me of a graphic for a game or something.

 

[McNugget801]

1 a bit dark but the tonemapping works here.
2 over tonemapped, unnatural, blue is over saturated, and the composition is weak

 

[BGL]

2 ...and the composition is weak

Um.... how so?

You are going to have to back that one up.

 

[McNugget801]

the cart thingy on the left blends into the plane in the distance and makes them look somewhat connected and reduces the overall depth

we are looking down at the ground crew

the layers of equipment on the right side really seem mashed together, had you moved your position a bit you could of created space on that side of the image and again more depth


Also the tonemapping is a bit over cooked and sloppily done.
I can tell this is HDR from a mile away with the halo, over saturation, lack of smoothing, and all that noise in the sky.