Heaven Awaits

[MatchlessArts]

This shoot was really fun, especially seeing my wife jump. LoL that always makes my day

Heaven Awaits

 

[invisible]

I'm not a fan of over-processed images but I do like this one – kind of dreamy and the distortion adds some cool oneiric mood, along with the purplish clouds. The one thing I don't like about the treatment is the shadow under the model – it seems as if it was added in post, and it doesn't really look right to me. Also – personal preference – I would consider cropping off the bottom 10-20% for a bit of a pano view.

Good stuff.

 

[MatchlessArts]

noted, thanks for the feedback buddy

 

[Majeed Badizadegan]

Matchless, I think since your subject is looking up, the crop right above her face is really creating friction. I like the effect, style, and processing for the most part, but there needs to be more space (possibly significantly more space) above your subject given the direction of her gaze and the framing of the image.