How's this for an aspiring real estate photographer C&C

Except he has said nothing of the sort - this is the beginners section, we get beginners in here ---- expect them!

Right now that is out of the way back to the image, a few things stand out.

1) You really need a tripod I think so that you can really get a good clear composition, at the moment the shot looks a little grabby, with the angle being a little on the slide.

2) You also need a smaller aperture when taking this shot - or to use a more zoomy lens, one or the other or both. This is to get a greater depth of field, since as it stands you only have a tiny bit of the tap head in focus, the rest is all in horrible blur - you need more in focus for it to work well I think, especially for realestate work which is not aimed at being abstract art
Note a tripod would help here as it would let you use a slower shutter speed with that smaller aperture (bigger f number and less light getting through the camera) without getting blur from handshake

3) I would also readup on some editing methods as well - noise, sharpening, levels, curves, saturation and so forth - there is some good reading on this site here - have a read and start to put it into practice
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4) I would also recomend considering perhapse a few different developing centres, wallmart is quick and easy but not that professional (at least from what I read) so maybe some others could recomend places to get your film developed.

I would also recomend getting hold of and reading Understanding Exposure by Bryan Peterson for some more advice about exposure settings, I think you need to work on this some more otherwise its really going to let you down.

As for the shot for realestate I am not in this area at all but to me a set of taps is not really what they are after I think - when I see people posting realestate work its wideangle shots of rooms and similar works.