How's this one? C/C, please.

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Sorry my first comment was not for this shot,

It's a greate shot for a broshure, nice one..
 
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Needs to be straightened, boring shot.

Ask yourself:

1. Why is this visually appealing?
2. Why does the viewer care what is in the picture?
3. What do you want the viewer to look at specifically?
4. What do you want the viewer to feel when they look at this picture?



For me, the answers with this photo are:

1. I isnt
2. I don't
3. I see a bunch of buildings. So what?
4. I feel nothing.



(I dont mean this in a mean way, I have the same problem with a lot of my pictures too ^^ Just keep this stuff in mind.)
 
Quite ok. Bit of a lean to the right, with the verticals. Bit of pincushion at waterlevel.
 
Depends on the context, would you say? As an editorial image, re: development of 'waterfront business district', it would be fine.

Needs to be straightened, boring shot.

Ask yourself:

1. Why is this visually appealing?
2. Why does the viewer care what is in the picture?
3. What do you want the viewer to look at specifically?
4. What do you want the viewer to feel when they look at this picture?



For me, the answers with this photo are:

1. I isnt
2. I don't
3. I see a bunch of buildings. So what?
4. I feel nothing.



(I dont mean this in a mean way, I have the same problem with a lot of my pictures too ^^ Just keep this stuff in mind.)
 

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