I like it! I think that the brides face could have used a bit more fill... flash would have allow you to darken the background a bit also. That big white almost blown OOF area on camera left is the biggest killer in this shot.. should be easy to clone out!
post a set man.. not one by one...
Holy cow! That is one big bouquet! I would have a hard time posing them with that.
Out of curiosity, were you primary or secondary shooting? It looks like she's posing for a shot that someone else is taking... I could be wrong though.