I shot myself

[binga63]

criticisms?

 

[PhotoWrangler]

They're both soft, and the lighting needs some work. What was your intent with these?

 

[pgriz]

The background is brighter than you are...
Your eyes are shadowed more than other parts of your face.
The crop is too tight on the face.

Look up "Bend the Light" who has posted some pretty good portraiture shots.

 

[binga63]

They're both soft, and the lighting needs some work. What was your intent with these?

I wanted the focus to be on the eyes...as I don't think I have a very adorable face that is why my entire head is not in the frame and why it is not in focus...just the eye/eyes.....
While not having access to my toys is this version better?

 

[Frequency]

yes, this new edit brings the texture and color of your skin better;yet needs fill light, i think

 

[binga63]

ok... thanks.. frequency...

 

[JoshuaSimPhotography]

Wow, I now know what u look like!

 

[binga63]

Wow, I know know what u look like!

hehe ... yep olddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd