I should be working on something C&C

[greenjackson16]

here are some shots of mine, all C&C is appreciated

1.

By xfish7 at 2011-02-01
on the roof at the park (in film)

2.

By xfish7 at 2011-02-01
down the street, it created a weird effect. It was probably because I opened the film door whilst i was reeling up the photo.

3.

By xfish7 at 2011-02-01
something I was trying on the way home

4.

By xfish7 at 2011-02-01
my favorite

5.

By xfish7 at 2011-02-01
i like bonsai trees

thanks for looking
~Jackson

 

[greenjackson16]

anyone up for it?

 

[greenjackson16]

is this thing on?

 

[HWesh]

is this thing on?

It is on, sometimes people don't have anything to say about the photos till later on. I personally think that these photos are a bit boring.

 

[greenjackson16]

ok well thanks, I haven't been able to find much as interesting lately

 

[Chelsealynn31]

1. I like the look of this photo but I feel the centering or framing of this could have been executed a little better.

2. It's a nice a "nostalgic feeling" photo. But that's it.

3. The sky is nice, but i think it would look better if cropped to just outside the vehicle. The objects on the inside take away from the photo.

4. Eh, not really sure what you were trying for in this photo. There's no feel to it.

5. Could be a nice commercial shot for a magazine or something promoting bonsai trees. Underexposed though, maybe try some PP in the darkroom or digitally.

Film is hard to shoot because there is so much to experiment with and so much to go wrong and you never know what it's really gonna look like. I shoot film every once in a while and still haven't got that shot that really says something to me. Keep at it though.

 

[greenjackson16]

thanks sometimes thats why I like film, but other times I wonder why I waste the money to get 3 photos that look decent.

 

[Chelsealynn31]

haha my thoughts exactly. It's worth it if something is wonderful, but I've blown through so many rolls of film I probably could have some amazing equipment in my hands if I just saved my money.

 

[IAMAMRA]

Not a fan of any of these, the first too the PP seems weird(sorry), the road one is crooked as well. I do like number 4, but the tree seems blah...sorry not trying to be to harsh just honest! Film can be a PITA, so my hats are off to you!