Il- Kabocca Tan-Nanna Mary

[deggimatt]

 

[manaheim]

This is neat, but just barely misses I think.

When you have a composition that can work from a pure-centered and/or mostly (can't think of the word- but stick a mirror down the middle and the shot is the same either way), you have to be very careful that all the lines are true. It can't have a tilt, it needs to be REALLY centered, and you need to deal with perspective issues so the lines on the sides are straight up and down, etc.

Also I think you probably cropped a little too much up top.

Still, good eye and very close to a great shot.